This time have the main title running through the top of the lower third touching each corner, the main image through the image separating the text boxes on either side. This layout will reintroduce the image i was going to use in the first layout and be connected with the other graphic element in the bottom left hand corner. Not too sure about breaking up the text. Don't really see the point. Maybe the title could do with being ever so slightly deeper and shortening in length. Not too sure about the long band of negative space running along the bottom, seems to separate whats above the title from whats below it. Having said that the bottom image could be enlarged so as to interact with the decenders in the title. Could be interesting?
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